I sketch things out using a lot of wispy lines and it has been suggested that it would be more beneficial to my rough-making to try and plan more with pure shape instead. This was helpful feedback as I find myself that a lot of my roughs are unrecognisable and messy due to my sketchy planning.
I should also redraw the same composition a few times - perhaps with subtle differences to explore all the options I have before creating a final image. Another point brought up was to compare measurements of the rough with the final image so that image stays in the same proportions.
I don't like much about my final image, I think the only good part is the butterfly coming in from the corner. I was really bad with the inks, though I do like the areas of tone I've been able to include - I really would like to try more ink-based work.
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